Animation / Graphics - The quality could have been better (but you know that) and some mouth movements could have been smoother but overall:
Story - Not a very followable story but still pretty cool, you could have had some person tell what the story is or something
Audio - a nice catchy toon :D
Overall - I know you want to be like Adam Phillips but you need better characters and better story, but it's still cool and keep on working :)
the idea is interesting, the music goes good, maybe the animation looks a bit crispy sometimes but that bits the mood, the problem is that the ending looks not so proportionaly animaded, I mean the last escene, and some background would look better if more detailed, but it was entertaining to watch it.