great for a first submission. it looked realistic.very short. too much so. a bit shaky. i hope for more.
thanks for using my tune and wow, interesting subject matter!
Indeed a good start
Alright now look, that was damn near perfect for the mechanics of the body movements and what not. However, on the next try not to rush the graphic and artistic design of the characters.
Dont listen to the prude,
Newgrounds is everything by everyone. This falls under the category of 'everything' so don't let others censor your work.
That being said... all this looks like is you took a porn .gif and just rotoscoped it. Good for a first attempt. You could do better.