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My third short flash anim

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rated 1.36 / 5 stars
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Action
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lol
fight
animation
stickmen

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Uploaded
Jul 25, 2010 | 5:33 AM EDT

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Author Comments

This is about a stickman who gets killed
Im going to be making a sequel which will show why and how etc
please give me some constructive criticism
This is only my third flash and it took ages

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neverzonegamingneverzonegaming

Rated 3 / 5 stars

:@ mariogamer2010

@mariogamer2010 that was harsh and stick animations arent banned from newgrounds there are thousands of high scoring stick submittions and mspaint is not banned either inface 90% of game logos on newgrounds were quickly edited in from printscreen in ms paint including tom fulps ! oh and i see you have submitted art and music but its hard for you to critisize a flash animtion if you have no idea of how mlong it takes to make even a small stick toon so hopefull in your next review youll be more constuctive

anyway i think this submittion was a bit bland but my 3rd flash animation was a few squiggles and a total fail so its not too bad but improvement would be good ~ all the best


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HUNtalentedHUNtalented

Rated 2 / 5 stars

really not bad!

to mariogamer2010: that wasn't constructive, but hateful. If you said it to me, I would never make a flash movie again.
I liked the fight, but mariogamer2010 was right, you should make it longer.
For the 3rd time, this i great, but don't forget to finish your work.
I missed the: sounds, backgrounds, more detialed characters, objects.
Keep it up!
That was a "Constructive Criticism". -.-'


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ShotglassSerenadeShotglassSerenade

Rated 1 / 5 stars

just another stickman flash

and a very lousy one at that.
you should seriously improve the length and graphics, half of the time there wasn't even a background. Step up your game.


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Rampage856Rampage856

Rated 4 / 5 stars

ok..

it was kinda good for your third :)



mariogamer2010mariogamer2010

Rated 0 / 5 stars

Constructive Criticism

Animation 0/5
PAINT? YOU GOT TO BE KIDDING ME! Microsoft Paint?
That is crazy talk, use real flash! MS paint is banned from newgrounds!

Fighting 0/5
Wow, 4 seconds of fighting and about 30 seconds of funeral?
Goal: Add at least 20 more seconds of fighting for a 1

Quality and Quantity: 0000.1/5
You sure put no quality to the fight, but loads of quantity at the funeral?
Goal: Try to even them out for a 1

Stickmen: 0/5
Sorry stickmen aren't suppost to be on newgrounds, its just another one of there rules, sorry!
Goal: Don't use stickmen

Background design and music: 0/5
At least put some sky, or some sad music for the funeral.
Goal: Don't use ms paint at all, dont use pivot! use a professional animation with original characters for a 1.4

Rating: Horrible!!!


Theuberkilla responds:

I am not using paint U idiot im using adobe flash cs5