Hmm...
It was fairly good animation for your first flash (I know I couldn't do any better), but it was weird and way to short. 5/10 for good effort.
Author Comments
Well first and foremost, this is my first flash submission. I know it could also be a lot better. The idea though, came to me last night while watching tv. Thank you for watching by the way.
not bad..
I mean if its your first one it is pretty good.
OK First Try
Your flash is thoughtful, if not overly creative. There's a nice visual style that still needs to be improved upon. The flash could have benefitted from a narration, as the words took away from the visuals. Overall, not too bad for the first try.
It was not good.....
I know it is your first flash vid but thats no excuse to be lazy........ the backgroundmusic was all the was to it and things like this should not be on new grounds of all sites
Nice video
My only complaint is that it's too short. Best of luck with future submissions! :D