zoomed in a little too close.

but make it longer and add a little more action, it will be perfect.

Decent animation

The animation was good, though the characters looked a bit too easy to draw, and the text often ended up off the screen before it could be read.

Don't worry about drawing faces, clothes, arms and legs. First attempts may look rubbish, but there's plenty to inspire you on the internet.

Just make sure you're next video has more detail and is easier to understand and you'll do fine next time.

meh

nice but not that too original. it could be longer also i seen it all before nothing new.

Zoomed in too close.

Zoomed in too close and a bit fast paced. Stick fights are horribly generic. Try a new idea? :3

It was ok...

It needed to be longer and have more action but other than that it was a pretty good stick fight