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Shite Comic - Part 2

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Jul 7, 2010 | 7:04 PM EDT

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This is part 2 go watch part 1 first /portal/view/541561

My first comic project of this length, It was done within 5 weeks and I didn't wanna do anything too over the top. Don't take the whole thing seriously and if youre looking for something deep or meaningful you wont find it.
It is what it is, I hope some may enjoy it.

Cause of the file size it had to be divided in 2 parts.

Warning: Contains Cartoon Porn, if you are easily offended by that you shouldn't look through it!


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Rated 4 / 5 stars

i have no comment........

but i'l lie


Rated 4 / 5 stars

First things first, instead of copying and pasting the same critic in both parts, I'll leave my honest and humble critic only to this volume. I see no sense to post the same thing at both parts. And YES, it IS a wall of text. I did not hold myself. I just wrote all I thought because I realy love his works, so if only Shadling reads, that's just nice. In fact, I wrote this for him, at the first place.

It's rather controversial. At first glance, the plot and motivations are awesome and that combined with your art style(that I absolutely love!) boosts the quality to another level. The quantity of details scattered everywhere is just insane, and it's really sweet the way the boxes gets organized and well combined - one invading and taking part into the next. I love you unique style and I absolutely LOVE the gore parts, focusing on dirty and disgusting details, yet libidual, sexually provocative and sometimes arousing. Even the cartoony way the characters get anatomically twisted and disproportional - this would be a critic elsewhere, but added to your art style, it becomes something good. But after the dialog takes part, the character motivation gets fogged. He sure IS utterly frustrated, but after a while, his frustrations lose some strenght and do not convince that much anymore to justify his sudden snap of conciousness.

However, some other points need to be made. I know that it was meant to be a one-shot, but it ended up not being, so some adaptations would be welcomed. The first part is too slow peaced when it comes to story progression. There's too much focus on details of the history that didn't need that much attention, and on some ocasions dialogs that didn't need to be there at all. The red parts, marked by the main character's maculation, is sometimes really instinctively clear, but in other ocasions it induces doubts - Is it really happening? How deep was the character into that? What really happened? Yet most of the times these red boxes ended up really well-planned.

Another thing is, the lack of focus on some main events that lead the story as a whole. Such as the rape and the fight. Both of them started and ended too quick. There was no need for such haste. You could have done a greater work just adding more of you. More of that mind-sick lust(that is your greater trademark!), more bloodlust, more of that innermost utter depravation. This is your trademark, and I absolutely love the way you do it in other arts and flashes. But I, personally thought that there wasn't quite enough(mostly on the rape part).

And my last point is: The ending. The story got in a amazing rush, really exciting. But then, suddenly, it ended. And the worst was that the end of the story invalidated past events. Why did he killed himself after raping her? He was so rage-driven that i believe this would never happen. He should have used her as a hostage and get out of the building. I believe you spent so much time on small details that it ended getting too exhausting to continue.

Then, I humbly finish my critic. I really love your work and I really enjoyed the comic, so I had to write what I think about it. I hope my words are not misunderstood, Shadling.

Good job, dude (; I would love to see a continuation, a retelling or a continuation. This plot really have all it's needed to be a great 6 parts of comic, or maybe more. I can't wait to dive into another comic work of your. Hurray (:

(I would give a 3.75, but that's not possible, so it feels like more of a 4 c:)


Rated 4 / 5 stars

It gets better! Plenty of violence, sex and shady activities. The coloring/drawing/etc is as detailed as always, professionally shady. Just wish it was longer. Nice work!



Rated 4 / 5 stars

nice job

1 thing that bugged me about this is you broke the laws of phsyicics when the guard was runing into the door from just a piece of wood cramed into the door i would have flown open if he had to pull that would have worked but the plank wasn't wedged or braced by anything realistically it would have given as much time as a "do not disturb" sign little things like this just seem to irk me other than that good job

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Rated 4 / 5 stars

Wow man, just finished part 1 and 2, amazing story. Something people can relate to in an extreme way, reading the fantasy alwaying them to vent out. Once again great job.