that.. was.. awesome!
why thank you :P
i dont know.. it was... funny...
hey im the first here (lolz :D)
Needs more detail.
I know what you're on about here... Hydrosphere, right? I did geography too. But there is just not really any description of any processes if, indeed, you intended it to be an informative flash. So need more on water processes in the cycle... percolation, deep-basin flow, evaporation, etc. Because it will be confusing for some people to understand what happened! I found it a little confusing myself because of the missing details!
Also you might want to think about introducing your character more. Shoop? Is he meant to be a water droplet? A little hard to understand because he starts off watching TV then jumps into water and lands a a rivers source??
I did like the use of your buttons and choice of subterranean flow and over land flow.
Good idea. I'd like to see more of this sort on NG. I think you should try to make some improvements and resubmit a more in-depth, informative flash! Good start though!
the task was to crate a story for 9-11 year olds and thanks