Shame it wasn't longer
Ah, a nice refreshing piece to view after such a melancholy day. I love the way that you've constructed this world and have given both sides of the piece an avatar of some kind, to give some sort of personality to the metaphors of Machina and Natural effectively living at odds with one another.
The pencil sketched piece was great for the portrayal, but the video quality did let it down a little - not necessarily your fault, perhaps something to do with the conversion software or compression. Perhaps you need to ask Tom for a bigger allowance to upload these files to Newgrounds? Going over 10 meg would give you better quality and allow you to really push the boundaries with pieces like this.
I really would love to see if this story leads somewhere, as I do feel strangely unfulfilled by watching this piece, as if it is leading into something bigger...
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