this is a short cartoon i made for newgrounds i will respond to all reviews and will try to include feedback so if you have any ideas for storylines just let me know (bear in mind im 15 and not a flash wiz so take it easy when responding)
the green defence comander decides to colonize golnarg-6 (pink planet) and he sets up a turret and a tower but the void legion attack and destroy a tower the edf assist the green defence on one void fleet but they make themselves scarce when a large fleet of three attack will the green defence fend of the perilous void legion -
Potential
You are a person with great potential, not becouse your flash skills are the most uber of all of Newgrounds, no, it is becouse you have realy original ideas. Flash skills can be taught, ideas can not.
Good luck =D, this is also quite interresting, a suggestion:
Make it something big, where you can see many things at the same time, so that you have to see the movie several times to see everything XD.
That, in my opinion, would be awesome.
good idea :)
Good Ideas
I hope you make this as a game one day - it looks like fun!
could doo i supose
Nice concept
It looked like a classic game made with vector graphics. An interesting way to build the drawing designs. I enjoyed watching the crazy antics that were going on but it felt kind of random for a colonization effort. Didn't really pull together for me until the green defense captured a moon and started mining it for resources.
The animation looks fine during battle scenes since action is going on to distract you but when the spaceships are just flying you can clearly tell that the animation is choppy. Try improving the fps just a little to make it look smoother. This series definitely has room to grow though. Bigger battle scenes and more desperate attempts to take over the colonized planet.
great thanks for the ideas
simple yet genious
this flash has ALOT of potetital.
if you would be paintent and creative. you can creat a much bigger sequal that would have not just two sides, but 4, across like 10 planets...
it can be really cool having all these small pieces eventually turn into something big and end up a galactic work.
make another one, you have great potetial
yea i will write up a story now
meh
you spelt "legion" wrong or mby its too small for my to see ehe well
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