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this is my new animation submitting after many days....this is made in flash 8....it contains totally 770 frames...runs at a speed of 24fps....total run time is 32 seconds....iam little confused whether to continue this project or drop it out.......you viewers have to say me......

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Pretty good.

The animation was smooth, everything was syncronised, the use of effects were awesome......
Even though it's short, it's not worth putting you down over the lenght. This is just great. You did put some effort on this. If you were to finish it, you'd easily get a current score of roughly 3.9-4.2
Good luck with your future endeavours.

Clearly Perfect

I love the music selection ;) Personally, I do think this is a worthwhile project to continue with. It's pretty well done, and even though it's part of a pretty stuffed genre (stick fights), you do it well, and I would actually like to see a finish.

If I may recommend not using frame by frame if you do finish it though? While you clearly do frame by frame great, 770 frames for 30 seconds of stick fight might be pushing it. At that rate, it might take you a year to finish. All in all though, this is a great start to a finished product man. 5/5. 10/10.

neem2345 responds:

hey thanks for the awesome music man.....

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I myself have tried to do stick animation and although I'm not bad, it's very time consuming so you get credit for that but I think that if you can be bothered with that you should widen your horizons to normal FBF animation, you're quite talented actually. 5/5 7/10

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Nice to see a smooth fighting animation:

Animation; 10 / 10
Audio; 9 / 10
Content; 8 / 10

Righty, the animtion itself was very smooth, absolutly not problems to find there, you obviously know what you are doing. The audio was very good, all of the sound effects were properly synced up as well, I think that the music was okay, although I would liked to have seen more animation with more music. This brings me to the content, I personally think that it was a bit short, although with the number of frames you spent making it, this merely me being picky. Also, it would have been nice to have some sort of back story, maybe a reason why he is fighting? I know that there was the mention of clones, but I still think that there could be more. Just a thought...

All in all; 9 / 10

neem2345 responds:

thanks a lot man....perfect review.....

Very good but...

you should speed it up a bit as it seemed a little slow to me but it may have been my computer making it slow so... anyways you get a 4/5 out of me.

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4,491
Votes
16
Score
2.76 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jul 5, 2010
9:55 AM EDT
Genre
Action