diffrences
From when he first uploaded the video to now, I actually see a lot of changes. theres a skip button in the prolouge and new scenes then from from when he first uploaded it.
Author Comments
Note: There is a skip button for the prologue in the bottom right hand corner.
Note: For those of you wondering, I have uploaded this before, but there was things I wanted to change by using the critiques I got from the last one.
Okay well this is officially the first episode of the unplanned amount of episodes in this series. The first episode is about as action packed as a first episode gets. The later episodes WILL show more color and difference then this one because I know that its basically a gray ship the whole time. Please critique and review! Enjoy the movie!
People need to understand one thing.
Mario is NOT Dragonball Z. Seeing Mario fly around very fast, shoot massive beams and teleport makes no damn sense to me. You may as well have just used characters from Dragonball Z than take the concept and just slap Mario onto it.
As for the Flash itself, it was VERY generic. The story isn't anything new or interesting, the fight scenes were really just in the way and I have no interest in watching Part 2. And yeah, don't keep re-uploading this because it's gotten a low score. If you want praise, do something original and actually interesting with it.
My review
Look, this was a great submission. Some people are overcriticizing it, but I'm definitively sure this was really OK.
The story is good, and can be even better in future episodes. My only negative point in this area is because you don't explained a kind of things in the start of the episode, for example, why Mario was in that ship and why Bowser suddenly appear. I get it only in the end, when that's explained. Also, what is that robot in the ship?
The movie is great. But you have to explain more things, or it will get a bit confused. Keep up the good work.
No points
This is not the THIRD time at least that you've uploaded this video, claiming to be improving it. I've seen all 3 incarnations of it, and I have noticed no differences. Stop trying to get a better score by resubmitting the same thing over and over again, and just leave it as it is. If you want better scores, submit the rest of the series (while improving your flash work).
Nice Animation but
You need a better backstory on this and it explains nothing of how bowser or the armor guy comes in so this needs some work. But your animating skills are sub par and have great potential. Try redoing this episode with a better backstory and you'll get an even better score.
