Excellent movie!!
Goku's first non-DBZ battle rocks!!!!!!!!!
Author Comments
I actually worked hard on this, but I did not make it long because I may not even get accepted,lol.
It's not that bad
I like the Sprites you have Chosen. Their just has to be more fighting :).. well longer Fighting I guess :P.
Very good :)
I like the old sprite style, and I'd love to see more.
Please try not to pan the camera so much, camera travelling is like salt. Adds to the taste when used with measure, ruins the taste when used too much..
DarkFlash21 responds:
Oh, ok! I will not use it so much anymore, i'll try to keep it on one angle only.
It's pretty alright
Pros:
Fun to watch
Short and sweet
Cons:
Too short
Want more
Maybe put a bit more in
Perhaps make a little bit longer
Increase the length
Greater duration
More stuff
Bigger
This may..
not get accepted because you did nit even make it long. For me the length of a non-repeating animation is an indicator for creative effort.
Using the old sprites may become your distinctive style.
DarkFlash21 responds:
Thank you! I promisse the next ones will be so much longer!