Add some music, change up the pace of a couple scenes, but otherwise, not too shabby. Better than what I would have done.
thnx man it culd partly be i dont have a webcam so i make them in wmm and import them
The story was really deep. I though that the symbolism of the white man's dominance over the black man was a particularly biting critique on American society.
All joking aside, you need sound, music, more fluid animation, and some more detail in your sculpture if you want to score better.