My first decent flash. I adore Krinkels so I thought I'd make a little tribute to the epic Madness Combat series.
This is about military Squad 718 (the ones wearing helmets) setting out on their ultimate challenge, killing their animator (me/ the one wearing green shades and the IMI UZI).
BTW, the team members are-
Fred Anderson-Primary: Saiga-12K. Secondary: S&W Model 500.
Ronald Wiley-Primary: FN FAL Carbine. Secondary: Samopal 62 Skorpion (not seen in the animation). Scott Caesar-Primary: M134 Dillon Minigun. Secondary: H&K Machine Pistol 7 (MP-7).
Daniel Sanders-Primary: Macmillan Tac-50. Secondary: Glock 18C.
Samuel Taylor-Primary- Steyr Armee Universal Gewehr (AUG). Station: chopper gunner.
Leeroy and Gabriel Oliver-Station: chopper pilots.
VERY good for your first animation.
It's just that you need to stop being so stubborn when people say it's bad. Take criticism. And btw, madness DOES have a storyline.
Pros- Fitting music
Great story
Good death schemes
Pretty cool action scenes
Cons- Frame rate needs to be higher
Bodies need to move more with the hand movements
Walking is terrible
Almost same wound used every time
Animation needs easing and slightly faster movements
No blad splats
Overall, this is a GREAT start.
Nice start
Not bad just 2 things buddy:
First work on the legs movements
Second increase the fps
I think you will improve fast
I'ts good for being your first serious animation
I dont know what people say this is a shit, because this is very good, allright, your not Krinkels, but, man, i liked this, personally, you just made something to turn a little the history, you just made an army battle, not one hero, lots of them!
This is what I think
Ok, I have to say, I expected something worse. It was choppy, the agents were dumb, and the chopper was ok, and at least you drew it yourself, but the blade on top doesn't look very good. Also, feet weren't animated very good, and they were very stiff.
I think the backgrounds weren't to bad, so overall, I'd give it a 5.
wth
what is this ?
animation meybe 1
story 0
you need more traning
more timeworking on animation
