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Yup this is my first ever flash movie sound i will add later i just want some tips :D

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its a start

Needs sound effects for one thing. Background music would help alot too.

There also doesn't seem to be a point to him being out there. I don't feel any story going on. It doesn't necessarily have to be a fight, but there has to be some reason for what's going on. It just looks like he's attacking air and running in random directions.

And it's a good idea not to loop the animation. It should have a definite end--unless you have a specific reason for looping. So, add a start button or preloader.

pretty good

Better than many other things out there *ahem*kk*ahem*

good good

thats pretty sweet compared to some of the other first anamations ive seen

ok.

Even considering that this is your first flash, I am not gonna lie that was prob one of the worst flashes I have seen today. So I can not in good taste give it anything more than a 1/5 and a 2/10. No offense intended. I don't have any tips other than keep at it and work hard to develop characters in your flashes. A lot of times quality characters and good writing can cover up any bad animating. So again keep at it and find what suites you ;D

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Jun 15, 2010
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