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Sasukes Day Of

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Yup this is my first ever flash movie sound i will add later i just want some tips :D

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The flash would of benefitted as a collaboration rather than a single animator I say this because while the overall animation isnt bad the music did need work and there was no creative writing direction in this. It has potential though but needs to be expanded upon to reach its peak

its a start

Needs sound effects for one thing. Background music would help alot too.

There also doesn't seem to be a point to him being out there. I don't feel any story going on. It doesn't necessarily have to be a fight, but there has to be some reason for what's going on. It just looks like he's attacking air and running in random directions.

And it's a good idea not to loop the animation. It should have a definite end--unless you have a specific reason for looping. So, add a start button or preloader.

pretty good

Better than many other things out there *ahem*kk*ahem*

good good

thats pretty sweet compared to some of the other first anamations ive seen

ok.

Even considering that this is your first flash, I am not gonna lie that was prob one of the worst flashes I have seen today. So I can not in good taste give it anything more than a 1/5 and a 2/10. No offense intended. I don't have any tips other than keep at it and work hard to develop characters in your flashes. A lot of times quality characters and good writing can cover up any bad animating. So again keep at it and find what suites you ;D

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Score
2.76 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jun 15, 2010
8:33 PM EDT
Genre
Experimental
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