I like the graphics
it's not bad for a first game. I even like it, just a few bits and bobs I'd advise working on. Such as the model, maybe give the player a chance to change how she looks such as her hair ect. definitely needs more options for clothes,I understand it takes a long time to draw them all out, but for a game like this I've noticed a lot of someone's rating goes on the outfits. I found it difficult to get the dresses to fit right and the one underneath would still show through. not a problem with your art at all but maybe you should have some sort of script to allow the dresses to be put on just right once the person has chosen it though thats up for opinion.
There's not much of a sense of time or a sense of anything really in the game, so music in the background from the 50s to add a little ambience?
okay I know that's all quite critical but you've a lot of potential with this keep up the good work do what you feel would make a good game and damn the rest. You'll get there!