Amazing artwork and very meaningful dialogue! It was truely grim, however, but I guess that was the point of it.
P.S. - How did you create your artwork? What did you use?
Sir, I am impressed with your work. From the opening quotes of Shakespeare and Plato, along with your interesting presentation of a graphic novel piece by exquisite piece, I was hooked. The timing is especially piquant. Your line about the "delight" of crows particularly struck me, and I had to check to see if you had artistically "borrowed" it for your work. You didn't , at least, not that I could find. However, I knew you were writing in your own style - heavily influenced by Shakespeare and Poe (which is never a bad thing) - when the War poem appeared. My hat's off to you. Congratulations on an exciting work which has merit in both its visuals and its narration. I look forward to your next submissions.
you should do some art for the art portal!
Don't mind the motion so much.... But the presentation and design was AWESOME.
The only thing that got to me was the tiny font :(
The things people create...
I like this comic very much, to me it just sent me a deep message, I don't know if that was intended, but you've caught my eye, stunning artwork, excellent plot. You've managed to present your work to the point where, if the word's were gone, by that I mean the ones that showed up as a bit of a narration, with just the constant, "WAR" and "MURDER" the story would explain itself, at least in my opinion it would. 10/10 I can't say less, nor can I say more. Except for keep at it, this is a wonderful Motion Comic.