Rlly nice to watch something diferent and meaningfukll in newgorunds :D
Don't mind the motion so much.... But the presentation and design was AWESOME.
The only thing that got to me was the tiny font :(
Nice drawings, good tone, but...
...why the motion comic format? Not to be rude, but I happen to be a strong disliker of motion comics (Broken Saints, Thamesis, The Street Fighter Motion Comic, etc.). I don't know why they became popular. Outside of that...
In terms of graphics, those are nice looking drawings, but I've seen flash on here that have actual animation with much smaller filesizes than this. Not just those made out of imported graphics (Ackbar and sprite movies come to mind), but cartoons drawn directly in flash. Then there's the sound, which you did a good job on which set a good tone. As for the text, nice use of poetry, but even in fullscreen mode it was still hard to see. However, I clicked on certain areas, which alleviated that problem. Plus, what's with the big filesize anyway? Something like this should be four megabytes at most instead of eight.
What I do like:
-Good plot so far
What I don't like:
-Next to no animation.
-Could use a bigger font.
-Needlessly big flash resolution
Overall: I see that you put effort into this, but I think it would be a whole lot better if you did this similar to JibJab's cartoons. Plus, I think you could learn how to optimize your flash better. Here's a six out of ten.
Far exceeded my expectiations. I love the art that you used. And the dark somber tone to everything. The war machines were my favorites. I went to the website to read Chapter 1. Can't wait to see more!!!
Beautiful and dark. Well done Sir. It is very obvious that you put a lot of time and effort into this. I must say that it's flawless. The music matched perfectly.