but.. could the text get bigger? i mean.. I love what you have done... but... im sorry i just couldnt read very small text... though, i liked the concept of putting a "click to forward" button so that other readers like me who also have a hard time reading could take our time reading...
the artwork, the style, the music! just damn awesome!
The most awe-inspiring, heart-trembling, brain-freezing flash I have EVER seen.
How long did it take you to complete all the artwork for the prologue? And is this for an assessment or just freelance work?
The art is absolutely BEAUTIFUL
and it's quite the interactive novel...not much plot developmet yet, but i REALLY wanna see more!
good job so far
I liked the concept, however there were a few things that made the animation really hard to enjoy.
The crow sound effect in the beginning was too repetitive and after a long while became annoying.
Some of the shots are too similar (the bird flying away shot with the brown in the back ground.) if you wanted to keep this in i would fade in quicker to get the next scene. the shots seem stretched out, remember people see all the good things within the first 1 to 3 seconds. if you force the view to stare at it any longer they start to see all the problems.
Other than those things i think you are off to a really good start. I hope to see the finished product soon. Hope my review was helpful to you. :P