The first steps

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school project, it's about the first steps of evolution from single cells to the sea creatures coming onto land.

nothing special just a little fun movie ;)

song: Drive Away - Lemony Snicket's an unfortunate series of events

edit: noticed i forgot to put in a replay button and that you can see the edge ill fix that when i have time



i like the imaginative creatures and the whole theory of evolution/dog eat dog world you captured here.


i think you missed a few numbers

Pretty good.

I like how you displayed an evolution type animation, I have been dieing to see one. You here have displayed this in a good way. I like the choice of colours movement and song.

However, there are a few things that I think you should consider.
The cells suddenly turn into creatures, there isn't any morphing or anything, it just suddenly turns into a creature of some sort. I would also have liked to see more changes and a branch off of different creatures over time. I also noticed how there are some numbers missing.

Anyways, good job and keep up the good work!

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SplinterNrurse responds:

ye i was meaning to make a more detailed and longer movie(past the point that they become dinosaurs etc.) but since time was a very big issue and it could only be a minute long i had to cut it down a lot

not bad

this is like a wierd version of the counting clips on sesame street. I like the idea behind it though, reflecting evolution.

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Pretty interesting!

Though I don't believe in evolution, this is really cool. I especially liked all the numbers flying around, haha. It was really nice. I hope you make a good grade on your project; you deserve it!

SplinterNrurse responds:

hehe yep i passed that class with pretty good grades thx ;)

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3.37 / 5.00

Jun 11, 2010
3:27 PM EDT