its ok i guess
looks like timmy from fairy god parents and when i saw the fire part i thought hed evolve b4 any of the other dinosaurs
The titular bunny-dinosaur thing discovers fire. Hilarity and calamity ensue.
This is my first Newgrounds submission (NOT my first Flash animation), and I'm pretty excited to share it. This cartoon is nothing too special, just a lighthearted comedy for anyone to enjoy. Hope you like it!
its ok i guess
looks like timmy from fairy god parents and when i saw the fire part i thought hed evolve b4 any of the other dinosaurs
Awesome and thanks, a few pointers though
Thanks for putting me in the special thanks, I didn't know I had that much of an influnce, regardless I thankyou.
Nice smooth animation, some funny and nastalgic jokes.
My concerns though:
1. This is a real step up from the sonic animation (which you should upload) but don't let the cartoony looks coast through the whole animation. Jokes must be delivered quick, maybe faster in your case but it was funny.
2. Use less sound effects, I understand there aren't many things going on but each movement doesn't need a sound effect. Maybe the major but not the minor.
3. Maybe more color? I know he is in the time of the dinosaurs but not all of the planet back then was a barren wasteland.
Hopefully that wasn't harsh but I hope that it was helpful. When you are up for a collab let me know! :D
A Tribute
What sems like a tribute to classic cartoons, using no voices you've not only created a world but you've made a real character. I actually look forward to more, granted the jokes are a little better next time -- that's the one weakness to this animation.
Okay
Most of the jokes fell under the category of "Oh, didn't see THAT coming" but I laughed when Hoppy squished the bug, and some of his facial expressions made me chuckle. And considering this is your first flash, it's pretty alright. Just remember that most(well, SOME) people like something a bit different than "guy runs off cliff but keeps running anyway, stops then looks down, then back at the camera with a scared expression, then falls." But again, it's your first flash, I'm not expecting groundbreaking material here.
YOU GOT A SMILEY FACE STICKER ON YOUR REPORT CARD, GOOD JOB
It's actually my first SUBMISSION, not my first movie. But I see what you mean.
Love It!
Nice for a first try.