good
i couldnt read the end it went off to fast
Author Comments
This is my first flash, so im highly honored to be submitting this to newgrounds, which is a site i have been apart of since my childhood years.
take it easy guys,
ill get better :)
credits:
animation - aeoxeternal
original poem - Eugene Field
Music - Evil-Dog - Outbreak
whoa
wow first flash? VERY well done! i thought the drawings were AWESOME i actually thought u had made more other than this juding from the drawings yah true the voice was a bit ehh but i liked it i rekon it suited it.. well done n keep up good work!
aeoxeternal responds:
your criticism and praise is very much appreciated.
keep a look out for me, ill make much much better ones!
:P
Really Good
This was very well done for a first flash. The voice acting was a little hard to understand but i like the errieness to it. Putting a spin on classic tales is always intresting. Hope to see more from you.
aeoxeternal responds:
thanks very much :)
pretty good
for your first flash animation, it is very good ;)
keep up the good work and put a little effort in the voices xD
aeoxeternal responds:
Thank you :)
i will do that ^_^
Not bad for first ever flash
I gave it a 2, but only because its your fist flash. The voice was terrible, so don't make that mistake again. But the animation, although it definitely needs work, was far better than a lot of the junk that comes through here.
aeoxeternal responds:
i will keep that in mind.
i will work on my voice, and honestly i put no effort into it because i didnt take this flash as seriously as i should have.
just an experiment though,
my next flash, i WILL take it as serious as i possibly can.
just keep an eye out :)
