Just on virtue of style, execution and the way this was done this flash is good. What few shortcuts or errors in drawing are not really problematic. And it suits the characters in the way you did it. Well done x)
Thank you! I think this is the most...drawing intensive flash I've done.
I started watching without reading the comments. At first, I was like: "Why does the guy look like Neji and the girl look like Ten-Ten?" Then I got to the part where it was naming the rest of the cast and I went, "Oh." Then I read your comments.
Really well done. I could easily recognize every character. Transitions were good and I like the noir style. The opening, I think, was darker than it needed to be (the purple could have been brighter against the black, for example). Dramatic doesn't necessarily mean dark-as-possible. I think greater contrast would help.
Thanks! Yeah, I know I have some constrast issues but the laptop that I use to work on this Flash has an insanely bright monitor that...even when messing with the settings I can't really tell how well the color contrast works. :/ Thus, the slight message at the beginning of the flash.
One day, in the few future, I will have a new desktop with a decent monitor and everything will work. XD
i gotta say when i saw that this took place in chicago it immediatly got my attetion
i also think your animation is amzing and you have awesome potential
personally i cant wait to actually see this come out
and also one more thing dont dissapoint us now by never posting it up
Yeah, all of the city background sequences (except for 1 shot) are legit Chicago cityscapes. :D I love Chicago!
Actually, this is a trailer for a comic, not a full movie. Although the comic is kind of stalled too... >> we're working on it.
Nice! I love this ; and I could draw if you want ;)