OK, the first part was AMAZING. I really like your style. But the second half..... that ruined it entierly. Work on this and I hope to see better stuff from you.
Great start... about the other part... lol xD
could be better
The beginnig was really great but after.. you an do better then that
I most say the part from pirate cats was great, but there is a sayeng:
dont judge a book for its cover, it was senseless at the end.
I have another saying don't judge your mom by her penis.
ok, i really didn't understand that, what happened? all i saw was what ithink was a sandwhich with a gun and a red line. sorry, but keep trying ;)