Ok. Please read this.
This story has a great and original premise, but you need to be careful. You need to make sure that the writing and delivery is spot on or you will lose people. That is going to hards since have good voice actors is key to that. Effects also need to come into play. For example, If you had more time and had focused on the scene were the the two planets meet, that could be one of the most fantastic things on Newgrounds thus far. Your protagonist, being the bloke with the sword, needs to have a very deep emotional and physical trials, seeing that he is basically on a planet were everyone wants to kill him without a 2nd thought. But by the same token, a series about a guy by himself is kinda boring, I would think of some way to get himself some friends. Look...in summary, you need to focus on quality and presentation if you want this potentially amazing story noticed. Just think about it...
keep doing you best,