Not Bad

It was a good idea. I especially liked the title sequence. But the sound was too quiet, I turned the volume on my laptop to max and I could hardly hear it.

Sound! Sound!

I iiked the aminmation and the style of this piece. However, the sound mixing was TERRIBLE. Half of the dialog I could barely hear and had to turn up the volume. When the closing music came on, it nearly blew my speakers. Though I liked the look of the piece, I can't give it a high rating because I don't know if the dialog was funny or not. Please remix the dialog and repost this piece.