On One Day

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I got this idea when my brother moved his pet turtles from a bathtub to my house. Kinda made me wonder what it would be like to be just picked up and moved somewhere else. Im sure this a lot more dramatic then how it really would be but hey- it just makes sense to do it this way!

What if one day you where just... taken? How would you feel?

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AT first its sad then its happy at the end the suspense gets me every time! 5 stars

Needs abit more

Ok so first off i want to mention about the menu screen, it seems as if the "PLAY" buttons was way too small, it was not hard to find or anything but just seems i did have to look close, great job on the backround menu thingie though, that was a rather nice touch, I love the "SOFT" art and drawings now i see why the animation started off abit slow, but that was the perfect approach i thought, love the overtop "VIEW" on this, allthough it was slow it just seemed to work so really nice job, i do wish the whole animation was "LONGER" as it was pretty good and with some really nice and smooth artwork, just wish there was more to it, so if i can suggest anything i would go with adding more content expanding on the story could only mean a plus from this reviewer, so anyways great flash nice art and fantastic, keep up the good work.

Ad more content stretch the story abit more if you can.

A slow yet fantastic flash story



animation was good could of used a better story but was still touching
what program did you use?

super-luis responds:

Just Adobe Flash CS4. Even though it can barley handle it i love it.

Eh it was ok

Really not that great. It dosent really tell any story. You shouldve added in some kind of story or something. The tutle showing a couple of tears and then him suddenly coming back 3 weeks later just wasnt hat great.

Also i like how it started off in slow motion. It shows the serenity of the moment and such but as the hand came instead of keping it in slow motion I would speed it back up to normal time movement. Maybe a scream or two lol Idk.

Anyway Just some suggestions

Great Job

:) good job :D

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3.80 / 5.00

May 21, 2010
5:57 PM EDT