try a pre loader next time
This was definitely a unique video. I do recommend adding a preloading screen so that there is no lag in the actual video. Also, the animation could be a little better. The video had those two borders which gave the whole thing a strange feel to it. One more thing... I recommend actually ending the video at the end. As I write this, it is going into it's third play through. I did how the narrator had a personality of his own though. It really added a comical feel to it! Good Job!
It is as the prophecy foretold!
I lmao'd at this. I love the animation style, and it was just too funny to comprehend. The camel's hat is amazing.
I found this really amusing, just one or two little comments:
1) The voice acting at the beginning lacked a little something, just up until it pauses for you to be threatened by Carrotman. Otherwise I thought the rest of the voices were really well done and fit the characters.
2) The shot of Carrotman's TV was just a little bit too long I think, felt like it stalled the action a bit.
3) When Carrotman shoots the narrator, it wasn't immediately obvious to me who he was talkng to and I had to watch it again to work out what was going on. Perhaps just for that brief moment put a bit more emphasis on the difference between the voices of the narrator and the Carrotman. Or perhaps have Carrotman voiced by somebody else to make the difference more marked?
Otherwise I really enjoyed this and am now going to go and find the second half. Keep up the references! :)
Thank you. The second part is now online.
You have some very valid points, particularly the one about the TV. Something which I feel I might have repeated a bit with some of my other films and that I will definitely take into account for future films.
There are Beatles references in 3 of my films, including this one.
The other 2 are Monster Marathon and its sequel Midnight Flash...
You can find them here: www.youtube.com/carrotpatrol
nice job dude