Too. Little. Animation.
The Good:
+Good mouth animations.
+Decent voice work.
+Low file size.
The Bad:
-Very short.
-Poor graphical quality (bad drawings, border pop-in).
-Some animation looked tacked-on and unnatural.
-Joke is revealed in the title page.
Suggestions:
*Flesh out the plot some more and add more scenes.
*Some fitting music would be nice.
*Work on your drawings and animation techniques.
Also known as, "Sandwich", Too Much Salt tells the tale of a young man who decides to have a sandwich for lunch one day, only to discover that it is much too salty for his liking. That's about it, really, which is a shame, really. I think that if perhaps you worked on building up to the joke and improved some of the drawings, this could be a lot funnier - as it stands now, it isn't very funny at all.
[0/5]
/ADV