The animation is very good, and the sprites are really cute/well-made.
The pace of the scene is a bit fast, the text is a bit hard to follow.
Pity there won't be more of this, it could be great!
Thanks for the review :] And that is one of my primary problems in animating, I'm trying harder to address it though :]
There may be more of this but for now it's going to be hard for me to work on 2 animations on top of everything else. I'm glad you like it though :D