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TIFFany(the battle)

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this is a very short animation so i hope u like it

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Cool, but

Very very short, a 7/10 for the amazing animation

there's this thing called effort...

There was no plot, it was unoriginal, the rock golem animation was bad, I assume you meant "to be continued", no background image(s), no sound, overall no substance. If this was a test that's one thing, make sure you mention that. If you have a script for this, expand it, actually put forth an effort and make this at least a half way decent, if however much unoriginal it's destined to be, flash. If you don't have a script, write one, do something interesting at least, come up with a plot line at the very least and implement it, it's a lot more fun to create for a purpose than to just put together garbage.

Overall, work on a storyline and your animation, if you don't know how a character would move, act it out yourself what you want the character to do, take notice what parts move and which don't etc. Also backgrounds would be nice...

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Views
2,988
Votes
2
Score
2.25 / 5.00

Uploaded
May 15, 2010
4:40 AM EDT