wow I loved the animation clean sweet pretty good looking
okay yeah dragged out a bit I was all like if it's dragging out this much there's gonna be an EPIC punchline.............and then it was like no punch line WHAT!
that lost you alot of marks I still really liked this for the animation and the voice acting (and the choons) but not that funny I know it was supposed to be "senseless" but it just seemed pointless instead
work on your humour and your story and plot please!
good luck with future efforts and keep it up!
Fair comment, thanks for the constructive criticism mate!
Working on better stories as we speak.
My senseless shorts were more aimed at training my animation skills and finding a workflow I feel at ease with before strating bigger projects.
Stay tuned for the next ones:)
K so other than the animation seeming like it was going in a loop you did fine.
It made me laugh and it shows how pointles life is