Could be butter, but ...
Hey, I personally liked it. Jokes were rather good. However, the animation and audio was rather ... uh, messy. But defiantly has a lot of potential!
Just keep on practicing.
Author Comments
This is my longest animation yet, so you better like it. Its got Sonic, Tails, Knuckles, Shadow, Amy, Metal Sonic and Dr.Eggman in it. I didn't feel like putting up credits, but I'm the only one who worked on this.
EDIT: I turned down some of the sound to make it easier to listen to.
CatpoopvsTrain responds:
Maby I need a new mic, and I might try to fix the audio later.
lol
"i dont have a problem..you have a problem with me man..just shut up" lol this is hiliarious 5/5 10/10
CatpoopvsTrain responds:
lol, addiction.
There's a little too much 'crack'
First of all, the audio is pretty wretched. You nearly killed me when I first started the movie because it was so grating to listen to. Like nails on a chalkboard. It also made the dialogue hard to hear.
Considering the nature of the dialogue, however, I wasn't missing too much. I thought there were definitely clever moments, such as the Monty Python interlude, but it was just so hard to hear. There needs to be more wit to the writing for this to work. The art could use some more detail, timing and expression too. Overall, not bad...but there's room for improvement.
CatpoopvsTrain responds:
Hhhmmm... It must be my speakers, because everything sounds crappy on my computer, so I probably didn't notice the bad audio. I do feel like the jokes were much better on paper and turned out less funny. I should work on having better dialogue than rely on sudden change and refences as jokes.
Needs more funny
Funny not found.
CatpoopvsTrain responds:
Have you tried looking in your ass?
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2.67 / 5.00
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- May 10, 2010
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- Comedy - Parody