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I Like the concept of unfinished business, The audio went good.
for a first flash it is good,Just keep practicing =)
The animation wasn't the greatest, but the concept and story was quite good. I've always been interested in stories about ghosts moving on to the next world. The movie could have been longer, but still, this movie is very good.
I like the message that you the animation brings. Art could do with a little work but otherwise a good first flash animation.