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My first animation. My class was assigned to make a greeting card. Most students made happy bday cards, christmass cards, graduation cards, I took a different approach.
the sound effects are WAAAAY to loud in the beginning.
it also pauses too long n certain places.
Sound at the beginning is harsh on the ears. You should lower the pitch a bit, as well as the volume. Animation wasn't that great, but it's your first flash, so that should improve with practice. Also the concept itself was kinda iffy. I didn't really find it funny.
All in all, a decent animation. Passable, but not superb.
Viva la rasa, I love it because I am hispanic myself. Happy Cinco De Mayo! Love the music. ;)
I think you should try again.
This video could be made better. I suggest reposting once you learn a bit more about the program you are using. I will not speak of the content, because that is your business, not mine.
What did I just watch?
What the...? I think you might be insane. I think Hitler's gonna save this movie, though.
Fernando accepts a difficult mission from a suspicious guy who buys him some yoghurt.
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