Cute but need works.
One word: Animation. That is all.
The animation ruined it. I did like the motorcycle part though :) I give you three for concept and motorcycle
Love the concept...
But the drawing leaves a lot to be desired... Maybe you could sharpen your drawing skills before animation another one (same concept)? I kinda like the idea, don't want it to be wasted!
The animation is horrible.
But conceptually it's pretty interesting. I really did enjoy it despite the awful animation.