It's great that you put effort into trying to make the game as creative as possible. BUT i think that you could sharpen your programming skills a little before submitting flashes.
Just a suggestion, but perhaps you could ask some people (friends, family) to take a look at your game before submitting it; this way they could tell you what they found odd in the game. Examples include there only being 7 levels (opposing to the 8 dots shown) or some confusing gameplay (you didn't put in instructions past level 4 or so), or even a little more storyline.
But all in all, good effort, hope you keep trying to make more flashes.