Well done on this one.
I must say this one is quite better than Mobsters and you were right to redirect me here. I'm impressed by how much this improved. How long was in between the two animations? Anyhows, thumbs up.
Compared to Mobsters the animation quality has improved a great deal. It flowed along nicely like a coherent piece and it suited the simple drawing style. The emphasis you placed on the main characters by blacking out other people inside the train was clever and eats away space to give us that cramped up feeling. Apart from them details that stood out, it was a good quality animation overall.
I think you have a real affinity with the storyline. The length was perfect and the balance between jokes and resemblence of real life was fitting. Mobsters had a well done story as well but I liked this humorous one slightly better, even though that's just taste ofcourse. Small in-between jokes like the guy flying out of the other side of the train when our accountant steps in liven up the scene while main jokes like the 'fired' notice have the viewer laughing really hard :)
Animation & Drawing - 8 / 10
Storyline & Feeling - 10 / 10
You have my 9 / 10 and a 5 / 5.
Added you to list of favorites, looking forward to future work.
Mobsters had a good story. This one has both story and animation!