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This is my first real animated short film.
Four months in making.
Everything done by me.
Feedback appreciated.
I recommend watching it in HD. Only way to do this is by clicking either one of these links.
http://www.youtube.com/wa tch?v=-clDnZqTsF4
Edit: If anyone has any problems opening the youtube link I've embed it in my profile.
Edit 2: Thanks to whoever helped getting this to the front page.


mk i get it

i think people are dickin you over on these ratings. you said it already, first thing you state is it's an animated short film.*SPOILER ALERT* just a little tail of a guy crossing the street and not paying attention that he wasn't supposed to and then looks like an ass and falls in a man-hole. It's cute - good style of animation real clean and well figured movement for the most part it's good. I like it and you got a 5 and a 10 from me. So good work over all.

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im giving you a 7 because there was not much of a story line ( but the end was sort of funny) and because when he jumped out of the way of the cars it didnt look so great and last 7rafe7 comment was half true LOLS 7rafe7


Nice stuff, when its your 1, movie, your style of animating is interesting and it looks quite good, but when you re going to do your next movie pls. put there some story line, because here i rly expected something longer

P.S : you are rly talended artist, just make better scenario (can help you if you need - i cannot animate but i can make a good stories

I liked it.

Despite all the criticism of negativity below, I agree with the positive - It was an awesome first animation, very intricate style that I've never seen before! If you could come up with a plausible plot, some voice action, and a little more length, you'd be amazing!

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Yeah it lacked length, and yeah it lacked plot and story development
But who gives a damn!?!?!

First animation, Props!

Everyone who is saying this is garbage and whatnot, ask yourself this, "Do I even animate?" if no, then shut the hell up

If yes, then you must remember your first somewhat serious/serious animation, and you should realize how much potential Gzibalodis actually has

Keep it up man! Don't let these imbeciles tell you other wise. Other popular animators worked hard to achieve what they got. You can too, with hard and diligent work.

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Credits & Info

3.82 / 5.00

May 5, 2010
2:50 PM EDT