pretty good pic
Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.
I hope this works D:
pretty good pic
theres not that much pics to see but you did ok some other hentai slide show would have 465 photos in it but your was alright nothing bad.
you try'd and you did good
it's a bit short, and it would be handy if it was possible to use the arrow keys
to navigate but farther I liked it.
gave you a 4 for effort, but you'll get the other 6 stars left when you get more experience. with that said, things that could actually set you apart from the rest is...
1. needs music, nothing annoying but something you can listen to over and over.
2. make sure you know the size of the pic before you put it in, saw some that were too small
3. instead of just copying pics off the net, draw your own or get someone to do so, like a collab (but that requires a lot of talented friends) bad hentai drawings is just as worse as parody's of hentai flashes
other then that, I couldn't see why ya could turn into a good flash artist some day. at least you got initative to try. Look forward to your progress!
next time put a lil more effort in the pics are nice but the presentation is second rate
nice work u just need to enlarge those 2 small pictures
but it's ur first so i don't mind that.
1.some of the pictures are 2 small!
2.U should put some music
3.if U do put some music (and pleaze don't pick a bad song) also put a mute button.
other then that it's fine 4 a newnie :D
prety good for your first hentai, could use some improvement and it isnt so sexy has i was expecting,but still, nice job. :)
Hot and sexy. But could use some improvements. I PMed you!
great flash, so sexy not