you need to look at everything in screen, think about a film language that will work best for this kinda of calming scene. research animated and live action movies to see what works best, glistening water and birds flying towards a sunset is a good place to start. just think about what makes those elements calming, and represent them as best you can. i personally would like to see rolling glistening seas as people on boats passed below. just think, why? why have birds? why have the sun in the centre of the screen? why is it over the sea? understand these and it will make your movie alot more powerful.
thanks for the review, it does help ^_^
it was ok
i have to admitted i liked but you can hear the music on the audio portal the animation was always the same but it was accord whit the music
The Music is good, but the video is rather dull and Boring to watch... I belive this was wrongly catagorised as it should have just been an Audio Submision and not a Flash submision, Either that or you should have put (Video Loop) or something in the Title, so people who want to watch videos dont waste a few minuets of their time waiting for something to happen, when in the end... Nothing does...
it's categorized as an EXPERIMENT!
read the description, k?