DUDE THIS IS THE BEST XD
lol i like the story so far too it. and how once he put his headphones the real beat started to kick in XD niceee hope this turns into a series with mo' technooooo XD
As it is being said by multiple other people reviewing this, it definitely is a good idea, and I personally would really like to see this continued, it is definitely something that could be worked into a great series in my opinion. Great Job! :D
I'd LOVE to see...
This being turned into a series.
It already looks pretty damn good if i do say so myself.
And i DO say so myself.
Bottom Line: It would definately be amazing as a series.
it was ok
the animation was good, the music was ok.
you lost a few stars tho because the voice acting isn't very good. the lines are a bit corny and all in all the voice just doesn't fit
you've got something here
I like your story although some parts played out it matters what you do with it. Your animation not the best still better then alot of flashes I've seen on newgrounds, I mean ALOT. And as for Renegade25's comment he just plays too many games for one man to ever play to know your mixing the plot of an old NES game and half-life 2, and has no real points relevant to why or what you need to improve. And Bloodmourne who obviously doesn't know the difference between personal opinion (even if it's retarded) and critiqueing not even mentioning at all what the problems with the plot are, other then his fantasy to be a killer robot. Back to the review it seems like it has potential just work on it a little and you'll be doing awesome. All in all this flash is good for a new animatior good job keep up the good work.