Well I don't wanna be the guy who disrupts your chain of TEN's but I gotta say somethin here.
I definitely like where you were going with how the P-Bot is the brother and what not but this whole thing really lacked the drama I was looking for. The action at the climax went on way too fast. Animation's a tedious job but don't get lazy :P
It literally turned into this:
Scene 3: boy gets killed by monster
Scene 4: Pico, enraged, kills monster
Scene 5: boy saved by doctors
On a positive note, I thank you for taking the time to bring an original concept like this into newgrounds. Now this animation will inspire so many more to build off of it next year and I will watch more!!!
Loved the story!
P-Bot was really Pico's brother? That twist was rad and it was presented in a really cool way and the music in that moment was perfect. The voice-over also added it a deep feeling. Really good job.
btw, is me of that giant gorilla looked alot like an Uberkid?
Best of luck in the contest. :)
haha ya! he was supposed to be liek an UBER-kid monster
tiny holes that dont matter but still bug me one for examply is when the army guys says that none of their weapos could hurt him and pico just hits hime and shoots him a few times and it dies. doesnt matter just pointing it out i still loved it and pico did shoot him in the eye so i guess that would do more damage
he's the only one who knows its weak spots!! haha....
the animation, story, sound, and voices were all phenomenal. good work!
That was a great short story, and animation. You can really see and hear the hard work that was put into this flash, keep it up!