Very original story. I think the ending was the best (and the saddest) part.
That was fantastic!
I would agree with some people here, that it almost had me tearing up at the end. It almost seemed like you were reading from a book told by the south in the early 1900's. Very well told and a somewhat original that I haven't quite heard before.
Well Thought Out
I liked it to a certain extent, I just couldn't take it as seriously as it was intended. Maybe a different narrator would spook up the atmosphere a bit, 9/10 5/5. Oh yeah, I'll make sure to keep watching the great work.
When she died...
I'll admit it almost had me crying,I'm such a girl xD
But I thougt it was really good,despite the fact the ending where she died and the song was in the background made me cry. Nice work
Very nicely made
This one had some nice funny parts in it and the voice acting was really great, but... A bedtime story? Remind me never to leave my kids to sleep over at your place ; )