music

just add some hardcore music, and it is 10/10!

Nice animation. I like it.

Pros:
-Animation was smooth
-Art was well drawn, the black and white was a nice touch to the style, I like the floating limbs and head
-Story was funny

Cons:
-No sound effects/music (If you don't know how to import it/start the sound/stop the sound, etc. Send me a message)

Pretty much the only thing that made it go down in score was that there was no music. You have a nice style and everything, however. I look forward to your future submissions.

Yeah!

Yeah. That's what I'm talking about. Good start for a first submission. Didn't let me down.

Interesting Until The End

The ending was highly anti-climactic and non-creative. I found it interesting up until then.

not bad

slap some sound on this and it could be pretty decent