Needs more effort and detail

~~REVIEW~~
Now a test is fine if you ask me, but i think newgrounds has a section for this sorta stuff, but as for what you are presenting, It was kinda {SIMPLE} in its design mainly and i thought that was pretty good but could have used more detail and effort in the design less simple is what i was probably looking for, The {MUSIC} was a nice touch i thought and seemed to fit what you were trying to put together, the onlything i thought was needing work as said just before was the idea of it just being a test and wouldnt mind there being more of a full version presented rather then just the test portion of things, and the {ART} was again simple so these are some more things you can work on more character is needed more effects and color designs just mix it all up and make it much better then what it is, for now nice test.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
ake it more complex you had a simple design witch you could have worked out a few more details and more effort on

the design part of things. The Artwork needs more detail more shades and just more effort all around..

~~OVERALL~~
More of a test then anuthing else but for the mostpart pretty good,

~X~

Okay

With regards to the size, how big is that audio file you included? Frequently, obnoxiously large movies are the result of someone including background music that hasn't been compressed at all. What's the bit rate on that Pokemon song you used? You could probably reduce it dramatically and still have a good-sounding song to play in your flash.

As for other things that could be using up all that space, I'm at a loss. There wasn't really any animation to speak of. I'm not sure how those images are being stored, but I can't see them using 9.1 megs.

Fair, But needs work.

Your animation needs more "animation" Its still rather simple. But I like where it is going.

A test?

It was nice of you to make a test, but I really think you should not send flashes to Newgrounds that are just tests. The design in this was really simplistic, but I have seen worse. I will say that it was very nice of you to have that pokemon song in. That song has been remixed so many times with different versions, it is always cool to find a new version. I think the eyes look weird in this. They look just like little green rectangles in the character's eyes, so the art really needs work.