Choppy

The animation was choppy, the drawings were poor, and the sound synchronization was off. But on the subject of the sound, the voice acting was pretty good, infact its the only redeeming thing this flash had. The other sounds were grainy and choppy as well. The story wasnt terrible, but it wasnt helped by the choppyness of the animation at all.

Not bad

Not very developed, and the story is pretty choppy, but you certainly have potential.

o god...

even my first animation wasnt this bad!!!!

learn a few mor flash tricks and try again

wow this uber-sucked

As a regular user of the word "uber", I officially revoke all art, "uber", and living privledges... He you ever been on "You Are a Fucking Moron?" You should be... That was horrid.

What was that?

I'll tell you what that was... crap. I've shat things better looking than that.