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Ninja Training Course

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This is my very first flash game, hoping to make a successful career doing this. Redone the graphics, and added some animation.

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Keep going!

Not bad for someone's first effort! Just a few suggestions;
1) Put in an instructions screen (I know that it's obvious what we're meant to do, but it looks nicer to have one
2) A background could look interesting, and it makes it look like there's more effort in it
3) Since there isn't much detail in this game, you can afford to play around with the appearance of the text; try different ones, play with borders, or maybe draw your own.
But really, keep going with your flashes!

thom-alchemist responds:

Thank you, and i have been working on the background but i am a perfectionist and not a good artist, i'll get there though.

Keep it up

Not bad for your first one, keep on workin on it

thom-alchemist responds:

yeah i if i can find out how i'm going to put an updated version on here... only to find out how... forums here i come.

Good Effort

For a first try, it is quite good. I think the detection range for the object collisions was a little big. Keep up the development, and I'm sure you'll get there.

thom-alchemist responds:

thanks, i looked at making the detection range the exact range was a little tough. so i will just have to mess around until i found something that works.

Eh...

First try its cool but to be honest its nothing to special, It doesnt look like a ninja even. it looks more like an asian guy with an afro. It's a good first try.

thom-alchemist responds:

Just for you i fixed how he looks when i put the updated version on here, looks a little better but i am no artist by far.

Better than I could ever do

Cause I don't know how to make flashes but still not very entertaining. I see it's your first but you need to strive to better yourself. Everything is a constant work in progress.

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Uploaded
Apr 24, 2010
9:59 PM EDT