Subtitles were unnecessary.
Fluid, yet lumpy
I definitely enjoyed watching it, you made all of your characters very fluid and the action was very very entertaining. I also liked all the textures you used, and the beautiful were very nice as well. Kinda had a painterly feel to them, and I liked that. The big thing that bothered me though was their bodies were kinda lumpy looking. Like there's one shot of the bald guy's head and it looks really strange. Other than that the anatomy issues, this was great! Keep on animating! Can't wait to see your next one!
very nice but...
I think i saw some scenes from an anime or something. Some reminded me a lot Samurai champloo.
anyway, i got hooked when the first half ended. kinda started odd but finished very fluidely. I hope to see another of your work
Not great, but nice.
I found the animation to be choppy and a bit clumsy.
The audio didn't sync up some scenes which left me disappointed.
The characters' expressions need work. I didn't feel as though the pain, determination, nor the concentration the characters went through were properly expressed enough to convince me.
I also felt the the story didn't flow as it should. It felt like a tag-team match instead of a story. One character goes down and says "now!" and then another character gets up out of nowhere and starts fighting.
The fighting styles for the battle sequence were very nice! There were points where some movements were fluid and a few angles and positions were well proportioned. There were some parts of the fight where I felt I would get dizzy watching due to the background tilting around. Even though I see this as a tool to enhance the depth of the battle, the layers you used were something I felt were a bit unnecessary and that you could have gone a different route with.
You also may want to study proportion and perspective a bit more. Even though this was a nice concept, there were too many times where I felt that you could have gone the extra mile and used a different angle for the face instead of just a profile. Experimenting with perspectives on the human body could give you bigger ideas and better action sequences. This will help flesh out your ideas more because you'll understand how to keep your characters in proportion regardless of angle.
So best of luck to you next time. Hope to see something good.
they were kinda dumb and annoying.. the movie would be a 8 in my opin. without them