My 1st attempt at horror films. you could see it wasn't too successful. I just hope that it dosen't get deleted or something. But good thing is, nobody will have dreams at this one! :) Now updated with scary music
Slow...
The movie was somewhat slow-paced, almost as if you were merely trying to increase the running time for the sake of increasing it. It'd be nice if it moved a little more quickly.
The text was also difficult to read at some points. You could change its colour, or add a contrasting border around it to make it clearer.
But it's nice to see effort put into the background detail. Good luck in any further flashes!
Zillazillo, how scary!!!
I'm all wet!
please, notice the "horror" in quotation marks. It wasn't intended to be scary, I guess...
Not sure.
Given you're first attempt at a horror film, i chose to ignore the drawing quality, and focus on the horror side of it. The music sounds as if it's self-composed on a keyboard, and had a little too much timbre for my liking. The narrative was a little difficult to read sometimes, perhaps a black box at the bottom would have been better. From what i read of the story, i feel it would have been better left as a text only feature.
Didn't mind it
Be careful what colour you make the writing though, a few times it was the same as the background and couldn't be read.
On a whole, it needs a lot more too it.